Sample Cabrillo Rubrics

Rubrics can be organized and presented in many different ways. Before designing your own, it’s helpful to look at rubrics developed by other teachers in different disciplines. The following rubrics were all created by Cabrillo faculty and have been used successfully by these instructors.

Take a look at all the different ways you can organize and present your grading criteria to students. A chart works well for rubrics with only a few components, such as the one created by Denise Lim for essays in her Biology class. A rubric with many components may need to be written out in detail, like Marcy’s English 1A.

There is no right way to do this. You must find the method and shape that best fits your style and topic. The key issue, however, is clarity. You want your rubric to be easily understood by your students.

Short Essay Rubric (Used in Human Genetics course.)
Developed by Denise Lim, Biology.

Short Essay Rubric
Score Content Organization Development Use of Language
5 Answer is appropriate to the question. Content is factually correct. Clear sense of order. Begins with a thesis or topic sentence. Supporting points are presented in a logical progression. Develops each point with many specific details. Answers question completely. Uses technical or scientific terminology appropriately and correctly. No major grammatical or spelling errors.
4 Answer is appropriate to the question. Content may have one or two factual errors. May lack a thesis sentence, but points are presented in a logical progression. Each point supported with some details and evidence. All important points included. Accurate word choice. No more than 2 major errors and a few minor errors.
3 Content relates peripherally to the question; contains significant factual errors. Logic of argument is minimally perceivable. Points presented in a seemingly random fashion, but all support argument. Sparse details or evidence. Question only partially answered. Ordinary word choice; use of scientific terminology avoided. Some serious errors (but they don’t impair communication).
2 Content unrelated question. Lacks clear organizational plan. Reader is confused. Statements are unsupported by any detail or explanation. Repetitious, incoherent, illogical development. Limited vocabulary; errors impair communication.


Rubric for Assessing Photographs
Developed by Susan Hoisington, Photography

Concept, idea, visualization:
10 points Shows coherency of the concept with a high degree of originality and sophistication. The idea is well stated with visual elements and cues.
9 points Shows coherency of the concept with some originality and sophistication. The idea is stated with visual elements and cues but needs to be more clear or more strongly evident.
8 points Shows some coherency of the concept with commonly sued, cliché or stereotyped imagery. The idea is obtuse, and requires greater clarity through the use of visual elements and cues.
7 points Lacks general coherency of the concept. Many of the visual elements and cues do not lead the viewer to the intended idea.
6 points Lacks any coherency of the concept. Visual elements and cues do not lead the viewer to the intended idea.
0 points The work was not presented to me.

 

Composition & design:
10 points Shows strong internal integrity of the visual elements. Nothing needs to be added or removed – framing is superb.
9 points Shows internal integrity of the visual elements. A visual element needs to be added, moved or removed – framing needs some slight adjustment.
8 points Shows obvious weaknesses in the internal integrity of the visual elements. Many visual elements need to be added, moved or removed – framing needs definite adjustments.
7 points Image is breaking apart – there is very little internal integrity of the visual elements.
Most visual elements need to be rethought – framing needs major readjustment.
6 points Visual integrity is nonexistent and image has broken apart. All of the visual elements need to be rethought – framing needs a complete overhaul.
0 points The work was not presented to me.

 

Technical:
10 points Shows master in the use of photographic equipment and techniques to attain the assignment parameters.
9 points Shows a good command of the use of photographic equipment and techniques to attain most of the assignment parameters.
8 points Shows some command of the use of photographic equipment and techniques to attain some of the assignment parameters.
7 points Shows limited command of the use of photographic equipment and techniques to attain a few of the assignment parameters.
6 points Shows little or no command of the use of photographic equipment and techniques to attain a few or none of the assignment parameters.
0 points The work was not presented to me.


Rubric for Oceanography 10 Lab Project
Developed by Dave Schwartz, Geology

Bathymetric Map and Cross Section (Lab #2) Grading Criteria
An “A” grade (9 or 10 out of 10):
  • The contour lines are extremely smooth and evenly spaced with none of them touching each other.
  • Every water depth # has the appropriate contour line next to it and the entire map is “contoured”.
  • The overall presentation is excellent.
  • The cross section is accurate and complete and the bottoms of the canyons and top of the ridge are not flat.
  • The ends of the cross section are complete and the paper shows the vertical exaggeration.
An “B” grade (8 out of 10):
  • The contour lines are neat and smooth and appropriately spaced and some are touching, but very few.
  • Nearly all the water depth #’s are contoured, some may be missing, but very few.
  • The overall presentation is good and very few “shadows” are showing.
  • The cross section is accurate, but some information is missing, particularly on the ends.
  • Vertical exaggeration may or may not be shown.
A “C” grade (6 or 7 out of 10):
  • The contour lines are a little wide and show fringes, some may have double ends and some of them are obviously touching each other.
  • Some of the water depth #’s may not be contoured and the contour lines are all not evenly or properly spaced. There may be shadows on the map and the overall presentation is slightly sloppy.
  • The cross section is mostly accurate, but some information is off line and missing, particularly on the ends.
  • Vertical exaggeration may not be shown.
A “D” and “F” grade (5 or less out of 10):
  • The contour lines are sloppy and inaccurate and some or many are touching each other.
  • Several of the water depth #’s are not accurately contoured and the map is not complete.
  • The overall presentation is below or far below average.
  • The cross section is inaccurate, and much information is off line and missing.
  • Vertical exaggeration may be shown.


English1A Essay Rubric
Developed by Marcy Alancraig

Bathymetric Map and Cross Section (Lab #2) Grading Criteria
WOW!!! (90‐100 Points ‐ Grade A)
  • Begins with an introduction that shows your understanding of the issues, grabs your readers’ attention, and presents a strong and insightful thesis or point of view.
  • Engages the topic in a thoughtful and individual way, showing originality, elegance and clear thinking.
  • Develops the topic using a strong detail, quotes from other sources, and a unique synthesis of ideas.
  • Utilizes library research and quotes from outside sources, always properly citing them using the MLA format.
  • Possesses a fully explained and logical progression of ideas that indicates the writer’s sensitivity to different ways of looking at the topic with an awareness of key counter arguments and a consideration of how those alternate positions shape your understanding of the topic.
  • Ends with a strong conclusion that clarifies the significance of the paper’s lesson
  • Chooses words aptly and sometimes inventively.
  • Demonstrates mastery of most of the grammar and usage conventions of Standard English.
  • Uses phrasing, tone, and expression that reflects a unique personal voice.
Good! Almost There (80‐89 Points ‐ Grade B)
  • Begins with an introduction that shows some understanding of the issues, gives some background and has an adequate thesis or point of view.
  • Presents a thoughtful response to the topic, using appropriate reasoning and a partially realized analysis that is accurate.
  • Develops the topic showing appropriate details, a sense of orderly progress between ideas, and use of references that reveal a familiarity with the topic.
  • Uses words precisely if not creatively.
  • Varies sentence structure enough to read smoothly.
  • Utilizes library research and quotes from outside sources, usually properly citing them using the MLA format.
  • Uses competently the conventions of written English, containing few, if any, errors in sentence structure, punctuation and capitalization or usage.
  • Uses mostly consistent phrasing, tone and expression that reflects a personal world view and style.
Getting there (70‐79 Points ‐ Grade C)
  • Presents an adequate response to the topic, using superficial analysis and weak point of view.
  • Uses logical reasoning, but the supporting evidence is general and imprecise with few examples. There may be some small factual errors.
  • Uses a less precise vocabulary and may contain awkwardness of expression.
  • Utilizes library research and quotes from outside sources, with fairly consistent use of the MLA citation format. May make some errors.
  • Contains minor errors in mechanics and usage, and perhaps one or two more distracting errors in sentence structure.
  • Uses fairly consistent phrasing, tone and expression that reflect a personal world view and style with occasional inconsistencies.
Try Again (60‐69 Points ‐ Grade D)
  • Responds to the topic illogically, without a coherent structure or focus.
  • Has no point of view, uses mostly summary and lacks evidence and support.
  • Makes several large, factual errors.
  • Makes enough errors in usage and sentence structure to cause a reader serious, if occasional, distraction.
  • Improperly uses the MLA format for citations. Makes major errors in quoting and uses few sources.
  • Uses frequently inconsistent phrasing, tone and expression, often formulaic and imitative; lacks evidence of a personal worldview and style.
Let’s not even go there (50‐59 Points ‐ Grade F)
  • Doesn’t attempt the task or distorts it
  • Lacks organization or detail.
  • Contains many distracting errors in sentence structure, simplistic or inaccurate word choice, many repeated errors in grammar and usage.
  • Not enough is written to get a sense of personal worldview and style.